hazel

hazel

A Chapter by Ana Papaya
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I painted tulips
  petals the colour of our lips

soft pink, whispering 
with each brush 
     of warm autumn dreams 
that blossom in spring 

oranges and gold
    turned to blushing rose

and feathered touches
that fall
  into hazel eyes

and I sigh...

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© 2020 Ana Papaya


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Such a beautiful thought deserves a sigh at the end, before the rapturous applause and cries of encore.
And all that without even seeing the tulips! So great job on doing that 😀
Ps... Sigh 😀

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lorry

9 Months Ago

Im not allowed sharp things in my room of bouncy wallpaper and wraparound jackets. I even have to ty.. read more
Ana Papaya

9 Months Ago

That sounds terribly dangerous
Lorry

9 Months Ago

Its also why I don't use big words 😀
soft, tender and with hints of real passion in the colors.... the meeting of lips and eyes.... yes, resulting in that 'sigh'.... which just might be the best word for this poem ***sigh***

nicely done Ana

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ana Papaya

9 Months Ago

:) thx Curt!
Kisses, sweeter than wine. Simply divine Ana.

Chris

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ana Papaya

9 Months Ago

Thank you Chris. :)
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Gee
Tis lovely :). Your writing was softer more sensual a few years ago, well it seems that way to me. Did life change you( you don't have to answer that of course) or did your writing take a natural progression to pastures new ?

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ana Papaya

9 Months Ago

I write to my moods. Life changed my moods. :)
That's a round about way of say yes. Life cha.. read more
Gee

9 Months Ago

I see..........
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This poem have romantic beauty and completely giving self to another person. There is some nobility and willing to protect under wings of love. I am sorry if I missunderstood your poem. This is what I feel when I read it. It's good poem.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Ana Papaya

3 Years Ago

Your comment is wonderful, thank you so much.
I appreciate you reading and commenting.
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3 Years Ago

You welcome .. I am glad is was not completely out of the line. Sometimes is for me a hard to regorn.. read more
Gentle, wonderful and amazing use of description dear Ana. You made the reader believe and see your thoughts. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry. I did enjoy this one.
Coyote

Posted 3 Years Ago


Ana Papaya

3 Years Ago

Thank you Coyote, I am so glad that you enjoyed it :)
Coyote Poetry

3 Years Ago

I did like and you are welcome Ana.
A romance of words from the women's delicate soul.

Regards,
Al

Posted 3 Years Ago


Ana Papaya

3 Years Ago

Thank you for the sweet comment.
'.. and feathered touches that fall into.. .. and I sigh..'

And I sigh at your gentle flow of beautiful phrases. Such love makes the coming day even more precious.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Ana Papaya

3 Years Ago

thank you so much emma. i got lost in this dream and it sure was a nice one. :)

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