jealousy

jealousy

A Chapter by Ana Papaya
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it's been a long time
since i've gotten jealous over something
that was never mine

now if it's mine
i'd go beyond jealous
(something resembling vicious)
to protect it

i wouldn't hide in shadows
pretending no one can see

but what the hell
let's keep up appearances
shall we?

i'll be the chosen one
and you can be jealous

of me

~


© 2020 Ana Papaya


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nooooooooooooooo!!! tell me it's not so Ana... er.... I mean... okay, actually I am jealous, jealous of your writing, your abilities to use words to make me feel, your creative mind that explores in words so many different and unique ways to tell a story... but I also suspect that there are quite a few others who are also jealous (see below at the comments for proof).... so as one of those jealous guys, loved your poem Ana....


Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ana Papaya

10 Months Ago

When I wrote this I was pissed off at a few things. Honestly, everyone brings something different... read more
redzone

10 Months Ago

rant away Ana, but you are more than welcome for the comment... and I agree about the 'women should .. read more



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nooooooooooooooo!!! tell me it's not so Ana... er.... I mean... okay, actually I am jealous, jealous of your writing, your abilities to use words to make me feel, your creative mind that explores in words so many different and unique ways to tell a story... but I also suspect that there are quite a few others who are also jealous (see below at the comments for proof).... so as one of those jealous guys, loved your poem Ana....


Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ana Papaya

10 Months Ago

When I wrote this I was pissed off at a few things. Honestly, everyone brings something different... read more
redzone

10 Months Ago

rant away Ana, but you are more than welcome for the comment... and I agree about the 'women should .. read more
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Gee
Every time I see your snogging avatars the green mist descends. Who the f##k is he anyway, thinking he can come between us, the b*****d

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Gee

2 Years Ago

Jesus, couldn't you have chosen Stephen Hawking, I reckon I might have been able to beat him :)
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Ana Papaya

2 Years Ago

He was already taken with the stars. :)
Gee

2 Years Ago

What, dead ??
But we already are Ana.
And you are the chosen one.
For a while they thought it was me, but turns out i'm just a very naughty boy. :)




Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ana Papaya

2 Years Ago

:) yes you are Lorry
Lorry

2 Years Ago

Always look on the bright side of life, te-tum. Te-tum-ti-tum tum tum.
I'm thinking about games here. Trying to make certain others jealous of attention you are getting from elsewhere. Far better that, than the other way round. Wouldn't want to be jealous of attention my partner might attract :) Not sure that's what you intended Ana, but that's how your lines spoke to me.

Chris

Posted 2 Years Ago


Ana Papaya

2 Years Ago

my original inspiration isn't reflected clearly here, it sort of took a mind of it's own. :) I lik.. read more
longing to have that person we love from afar jealous of us...being with others to make that person jealous...lots of pretend...almost makes it feel real. Love the mystery, the intimation here.

j.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Ana Papaya

2 Years Ago

:) thanks so much Jacob

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