debris

debris

A Chapter by Ana Papaya
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"
~

my universe

    expands, and
breathes

i can feel you
   feel your world

seeping into me
   settling
into my debris

finding peace

~


© 2020 Ana Papaya


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This little piece of brevity spoke to me about the journey we take getting to know someone. The effect that they can have on our thoughts and being as we become closer to them. Thank you Ana.

Chris

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ana Papaya

8 Months Ago

It's very much like that. Thank you Chris. :)
nothing personal, but we always seem to be trying to get rid of excess debris
You should see my Daughter-in-law's house
A sea of debris
Oh well, time 4 coffee
he said
Have a lovely day A Papaya

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ana Papaya

10 Months Ago

Enjoy your coffee time. :)
that's the way I wanna go...

Neville :)

p.s.. this is a little gem..

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ana Papaya

1 Year Ago

Thanks a bunch Neville!
Neville

1 Year Ago


U R infinitely welcome :)
Ana Papaya

1 Year Ago

Thanks Nev! As are you my friend.
it's a wonderful feeling, finding that peace... makes the universe whole doesn't it... even making the 'debris' better.... it's a wonderful poem Ana....

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ana Papaya

1 Year Ago

Thank you :)
This is beautiful, I felt myself "Finding peace " in your flow of words☺

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ana Papaya

1 Year Ago

Thanks. I'm glad you felt it. :)
debris of a heart as it becomes reconstructed, two worlds mending at the same time.
a short piece with so much punch because of the unusual metaphor....
love it.

j.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ana Papaya

1 Year Ago

Thanks for loving it, jacob!

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