debris

debris

A Chapter by Ana Papaya
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my universe

    expands, and
breathes

i can feel you
   feel your world

seeping into me
   settling
into my debris

finding peace

~


© 2020 Ana Papaya


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nothing personal, but we always seem to be trying to get rid of excess debris
You should see my Daughter-in-law's house
A sea of debris
Oh well, time 4 coffee
he said
Have a lovely day A Papaya

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ana Papaya

1 Month Ago

Enjoy your coffee time. :)
that's the way I wanna go...

Neville :)

p.s.. this is a little gem..

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ana Papaya

3 Months Ago

Thanks a bunch Neville!
Neville

3 Months Ago


U R infinitely welcome :)
Ana Papaya

3 Months Ago

Thanks Nev! As are you my friend.
it's a wonderful feeling, finding that peace... makes the universe whole doesn't it... even making the 'debris' better.... it's a wonderful poem Ana....

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ana Papaya

4 Months Ago

Thank you :)
This is beautiful, I felt myself "Finding peace " in your flow of words☺

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ana Papaya

4 Months Ago

Thanks. I'm glad you felt it. :)
debris of a heart as it becomes reconstructed, two worlds mending at the same time.
a short piece with so much punch because of the unusual metaphor....
love it.

j.

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ana Papaya

4 Months Ago

Thanks for loving it, jacob!

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