Sun hurts my eyes

Sun hurts my eyes

A Chapter by Ana Papaya
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I love you
  like punishment loves pain
and flowers love the rain
    you're so beautiful
        it hurts


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© 2020 Ana Papaya


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I know this feeling oh-so-well. And you've put it perfectly succinct & palpable (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ana Papaya

4 Weeks Ago

Thank so much Margie. (:
Amazing use of words dear Ana. You said everything necessary in the few lines. Love, can make us know madness. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry for love.
Coyote

Posted 1 Year Ago


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Ana Papaya

1 Year Ago

Thank you kindly Coyote
Coyote Poetry

1 Year Ago

You are welcome dear Ana.
That's a pretty powerful love. I love it!

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ana Papaya

1 Year Ago

thanks very much James!
I'm a fan of micropoems (I've written a few myself), and this one certainly doesn't disappoint. Reading one like this gives me poem envy; I wish that I'd written it.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ana Papaya

1 Year Ago

Hi Roland, thank you very much for your kind words.
So amazing, This says so much in such a few lines. awesome

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ana Papaya

1 Year Ago

Thanks very much Kay-T!

when less is more, this say's it all and quite beautifully :)

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ana Papaya

1 Year Ago

Thank you kindly, N. :)
A bit of transactional analysis here....the pleasure/pain syndrome! Some things in life...and some people are too beautiful for words. So beautiful it hurts...absolutely. Lydi**

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ana Papaya

1 Year Ago

You know it. :)
Thanks Lydi!
Thanks Ana
I'll enjoy being your friend just so I can say/read your name
Just rolls off the tongue
Reminds me it has been too long since I had a good tasty papaya
Take care

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ana Papaya

1 Year Ago

I'm sure you can find them out your way. :)
I'm also a fan of mangoes and peaches. Yum.
some lucky person
I relate this to the bright morning sun peeking over the treetops, the birds chirping, the bees buzzing and the pure pleasure that all brings!
So, some luck person!!


Posted 1 Year Ago


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Ana Papaya

1 Year Ago

Hi Dave, good morning! Yes, that is a most perfect way of describing it. :) Thank you!
Sometimes who and what we love are those that hurt us.
Short but powerful!
I am a rainlover here.

Posted 1 Year Ago


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Ana Papaya

1 Year Ago

I don't mind a bit of rain from time to time either. Thanks for popping in and leaving a few kind w.. read more

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