It's tricky

It's tricky

A Chapter by Ana Papaya
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Sometimes I write about love 
that's a tricky one though 
how do you capture      
fireworks and fireflies 
in a child's eyes       
 or a ghost             
 that refuses to leave the love he waits for         
 after he dies
if only I knew 
 how to write these things 
I'd write about love more     
 and more 
 it's a tricky one though 
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I hear it's all about effort. You try until you can't intrinsically find a good reason to make a good effort. Some people last longer than others. But I'm wrong a lot of the time so... it might be about breakdancing to classical music or something far different. I spend most of my time with exotic felines so the whole 'human insight' thing is probably lost on me. It's tricky... it really is objectively so.

Posted 1 Year Ago


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Dennis The Tiger Cat (dave)

1 Year Ago

I wouldn't be shocked.

Have you ever heard of a fellow named Yiruma? Easily the gr.. read more
Ana Papaya

1 Year Ago

yes, i know of this person
Dennis The Tiger Cat (dave)

1 Year Ago

"Kiss the Rain" ls legitimately a significant contribution to music as a whole, at least I think so .. read more



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this is something I never write about
I do it a lot and I like it to be done especially a little sweet puppy dog's gentle lick on the end of the nose but the writing thingy never seems 2 go 2 well.
AP

Posted 11 Months Ago


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Ana Papaya

11 Months Ago

I guess you find it tricky too :)
Dave Brown

11 Months Ago

2 tricky!
he replied.
love is such a mystery, This is well expressed

Posted 1 Year Ago


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Ana Papaya

1 Year Ago

Sure is! Thanks for reading!
dear Ana... love is a Mystery... but it has a way of
appearing in a sky of Robin Egg blue with an iridescent glow
that defies reason... forming clouds with profiles of familiar faces..
a message that love is eternally free to wander and soothe our feelings
even with Birdsong and soft rumbles of thunder and passionate
persuasions of lightening... if only we believe. gently, Pat

Posted 1 Year Ago


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Ana Papaya

1 Year Ago

You make it sound so beautiful. And it is. Thank you Pat!! I love your uplifting comments always.
When I was about 12 I found the secret to writing about love on the back of a cereal box:) being twelve well... lets just say my focus was on other things at the time:/ so I didn't read the whole thing. The next morning As I was about to finish reading, I suddenly realized my grandmother had clipped the cereal box for a coupon to get free personalized pencils:( So dear Ana I haven't a clue how to write about love either

Posted 1 Year Ago


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Ana Papaya

1 Year Ago

With those personalized pencils though at least you're ready! :) thanks for the great comment Bunn.. read more

Oh' how I wish I could help, to lend a hand .. but I'm as stuck as you Ana.. every now and then.. I think I got it.. or got near to it.. but then realise that I have failed miserably .. I guess we just got to keep trying..

Neville


Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ana Papaya

1 Year Ago

Or give up? No... of course not. :)
Thx Neville!!
Neville

1 Year Ago


welcome ma'am and true :)
If it could be put into a jar, we wouldn't see so much heartbreaks in this world. Love is so complicated, and yet so simple at the same time. I guess that it's also a matter of luck, since we really are blind, and even more so when we fall in love.
How can you know you fell in love with the right person? There's no telling it, no until it probably is too late.
Well, damn, now I need to write something about this.

Posted 1 Year Ago


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Ana Papaya

1 Year Ago

Yes, there's probably a fair bit of luck involved. :)
yes, writing about pain is so much easier...and lost love as well...
but real love that lasts even past our mortal existence...pretty hard to capture...
but your hints allow us to know that you really understand that.
j.

Posted 1 Year Ago


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Ana Papaya

1 Year Ago

Thank you Jacob. :) Appreciate your comment here
The mystery of love. After almost 62 year of life. I believe the key to love is patience. Love will change with time and we must change with her. True love is a lifetime of good and bad days, and holding on tighter. Hopefully more good than bad. Hello dear Ana and thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ana Papaya

1 Year Ago

Thank you so much for the comment, Coyote. So nice to see you.
Coyote Poetry

1 Year Ago

Hello dear Ana and was a pleasure to read your work. You are welcome.
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Gee
Finding someone that is willing to commit themselves 100% is one of life's great challenges. There seems to be more casualties these days than ever before with love and marriage just another disposable commodity.
A broken heart will heal I suppose but trusting becomes so much more difficuly.
It's good to have you back around.
Enjoyed of course :)
Hope you are all well.

Posted 1 Year Ago


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Ana Papaya

1 Year Ago

Thanks Gee, and I fully agree. You and your Missus are a lucky pair. :) I always appreciate your.. read more
What's tricky is writing about love when you're not supposed to. I believe in love, deep love and even after years, it's still there...even when you share it with someone else. But, I'm in the middle of feeling a ton of emotions that I didn't know could exist in the same person at the same time.

Posted 1 Year Ago


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Ana Papaya

1 Year Ago

It's a complicated thing, most definitely!
Thanks James, always appreciate you sharing your.. read more

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