drip

drip

A Chapter by Ana Papaya
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fireflies gather
sharing secrets with stars
the sky's seams are coming apart
and it drips

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© 2020 Ana Papaya


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sounds like our chesterfield
we've got to replace it before it also starts dripping
a cutesy wootsey

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ana Papaya

10 Months Ago

Is it dripping that cotton stuffing stuff. :)
cutesy wootsey - smiles :)
What lovely imagery! Just awesome. I can imagine the leaky sky. Well written Ms. Ana!

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ana Papaya

1 Year Ago

Hi P, thank you. I'm glad you liked it :)
AJNJ

1 Year Ago

Indeed, every writer’s dream...such words! You’re welcome, Ms. Ana!
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Rye
I love this write, awesome

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ana Papaya

1 Year Ago

Thanks much!
such a perfect gem...makes me wish I were in on those secrets...
j.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ana Papaya

1 Year Ago

Hi J, thanks a bunch. If I learn the secrets I will share!
Love this little piece of brevity, especially "the sky's seams are coming apart". Well done Ana.

Chris

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ana Papaya

1 Year Ago

Thank you! :)


...............…. Quite lovely

Posted 1 Year Ago


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Ana Papaya

1 Year Ago

Thank you, Neville :)
Neville

1 Year Ago


and truly my pleasure...

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