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A Chapter by Ana Papaya
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a tear drop
    falls
so gently
          to a quiet
death

this is how
  i mourn       

silently

•~


© 2020 Ana Papaya


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teardrops shed after a death do suffer their own deaths---
wow....this is so cool, Ana...never quite thought of the poor teardrop that emerges from the womb of the eye...runs its course down a cheek, and then expires, much like a human who runs down the cheek of life.
j.

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Ana Papaya

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Your comment makes it sound so beautiful. Thank you.



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we all mourn in our own inimitable way ... I like your version ... silent and with dignity ...

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ana Papaya

9 Months Ago

Yes, that's it exactly. Silent and with dignity.
Thank you kindly, Neville.
Neville

9 Months Ago


..................... a solemn pleasure & always :)
And they are so aerodynamic they don't even stir the breeze.
An autobiography in sixteen words. Even for your wordifying, that is impressive.
I mean, I've barely scratched the surface and I'm already on...... 38 words, including these.
I'd say more, but I've now lost count.
😀

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ana Papaya

1 Year Ago

Oh. You're right. I see that now.
Thanks for popping in, Jon. :)
Jon Roggie

1 Year Ago

My pleasure,
and apologies Lorry,
Sorry to intrude
My manners can be terrible.. read more
Lorry

1 Year Ago

No need Jon, always welcome.
I try to stick to brevity too, before I see their eyes glaze ove.. read more
teardrops shed after a death do suffer their own deaths---
wow....this is so cool, Ana...never quite thought of the poor teardrop that emerges from the womb of the eye...runs its course down a cheek, and then expires, much like a human who runs down the cheek of life.
j.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ana Papaya

1 Year Ago

Your comment makes it sound so beautiful. Thank you.
Always a fan of great things said in few words. Quiet sorrow makes for great poetry.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ana Papaya

1 Year Ago

Thank you, again. :)
AJNJ

1 Year Ago

You're very welcome :)

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