Above and beneath

Above and beneath

A Chapter by Ana Papaya
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I am the warmth
of every season

teasing wisps of
   perfumed seduction
between streams
    of grandiose dreams

wrapt in tangled desires
dancing
    in moonbeams
       with a visceral greed

I long
to crush your screams
flesh to teeth

above and beneath
the warmth
of every season

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© 2020 Ana Papaya


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"Above and Beneath" ... hmmmmm ;) sensuous and romantic start says i .. and what unbridled passions one may be surprised to unleash :) Freddy Mercury lyric from https://youtu.be/VUeX3kiDf1k .."..pain is so close to pleasure.." ... call me old fashioned tho .. never could understand bites and scratches ;} but hey .. my life has been sheltered a bit ... i'm a shy guy :))))))))))))))))))but I sure love that song by Freddie ... so sad his passing :(
E.

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ana Papaya

10 Months Ago

Thanks very much, E. :)
Great song you've shared!
As for the bites, I'm probably just.. read more
Einstein Noodle

10 Months Ago

ahahahaha ... its a beautiful weird i am sure


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As above and so below, appreciated the ambiguity and manichaeism that is present in this, Ana!

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ana Papaya

9 Months Ago

Thank you again for the really nice comment! :)
Appears your prospective lovers had better have paid-up health insurance.
Still, there are worse ways to go.
A powerful--quite sensual--portrayal, poetess!

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ana Papaya

9 Months Ago

Fortunately, health care is free in Canada. :)
Thanks much!
Loved the contrast of the moonbeams with the visceral greed. That for me made this an exceptional read!

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ana Papaya

10 Months Ago

Good morning, Pestonjee. So happy you liked it!
AJNJ

10 Months Ago

Good Morning Ms. Ana. :)
Have a nice Sunday!
Linda, a little erotic, without all the eroticness. I kind of get the feeling you were in a good mood when you wrote this

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ana Papaya

10 Months Ago

Yes, I was in a very good mood
I think Linda was a typo meant to say "love it"?
:) .. read more
James

10 Months Ago

I don't know a Linda. I think I type a complete sentence there, but it's gone.
This one has a great flow, Ana, with the theme itself both romantic and slightly sadistic at the same time. Crushing screams will only invoke more screams, sometimes. As Neville below has intimated, this one sounds great in the head. Full of musicality.

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ana Papaya

10 Months Ago

Thanks Inessa. I appreciate your comment.
that is quite a nice although maybe not so proper way to have our screams silenced...
but damn....I am going to start screaming now.
j.

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ana Papaya

10 Months Ago

Lol! :) Thanks Jacob!
wow Ana, you write romantic poetry with a passionate pen... and it is a thrill to read it...

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ana Papaya

10 Months Ago

Hi Curt. :)
Thanks a bunch. So good to see you!


this is just beautiful Ana it looks so good on the page and sounds really ***** good in me head ................ my full address is in the post ... maybe we can come to some arrangement because the last time you tempted me around, I arrived late n you were gone ...

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Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ana Papaya

10 Months Ago

Lol! Thank Neville. I'll check the mail when I return home from vacation. :)
Neville

10 Months Ago


could that have been why I missed ya .... please say ... damn run outa spa
Ana Papaya

10 Months Ago

Ha! : )
Very sensual, and playfully inviting in every sense of the word. Flesh to teeth, the imagination goes wild! Simple but sweet and I loved it. Thanks for sharing! :)

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ana Papaya

10 Months Ago

Thanks very much, Mr. M. :)
Mr. Malarkey

10 Months Ago

You're always welcome :)
This one touches me personally, she is my warmth but a teasing whisp. We have grandiose dreams and Tangled desires. Maybe tmi, but I have her Mark me flesh to teeth, so that I might know that I am hers. When her Mark fades it's been too long.
It's not my situation that you were writing about, to capture it so perfectly means that you have tapped into humanity. Good write.
I have never given a 100 rating, I give 95 because there's always something better, but this has captured a moment of mine so perfectly that I give 100.

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ana Papaya

10 Months Ago

Thank you, T.S. I appreciate the comment very much and while I don't get hung up on ratings I'm gla.. read more

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