Illegal goodness

Illegal can be legaly good

Smell the scent from miles away

Open the window, dim the lights

Let your lungs absorbs today

Roll it big, hell roll it small

Doesn’t matter

Just inhale it all

The sudden kick is there

Blood on the highway to your brain

It’s quite extra-ordinary I swear

You laugh and cry

Inhale some more

It won’t make you die

And there it comes

Lust and passion

Feel the rhythm explode like beating drums

Go with the flow

Take it all in and let it all out

Push your boundaries, feel it grow

And as dessert will pop in

Smoke another

All over, the pleasure can begin

 

Reviews

[Kara Hadley]

um...pot...fun! oh dear, this was such a great poem.
the flow was really good. the only part that doesn't quite sit right with me is the last line. i don't know why, but it doesn't quite fit with everything. but the rest is really quite good; quite good indeed.


now i need a joint.

[Jasmina Amethyst Pendra..]

LOL oh have I been in these shoes before. This was a really good poem. In terms of structure it flowed perfectly. In terms of subject matter...like I said...been there, done that, laughed hysterically. Good job

~Liv

[Taja B.]

hahha this is prettty good. lol.It's pretty well written and you describe getting high quite nicely!lol. Eventhough I barely smoke anyways.l and I haven't for a long time.lol...

Nice job.:)

[|:x: Butterfly :x:|]

hahaha STONER!!! lol.
jkjk.
great poem.
ive had a few bfs that were stoners...
so i kno wat its like to b around them....
rele its not worth all the hype...
but yea.

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

Love this poem used to smoke the weed till i got too high once lol..thought i was dying ..

Love the metaphors and flow of this..

Chloe
xoxo

[Fantasyfairy]

A nice peom, God's nature. A poem for life this one, your choice of words is great and it has a very nice flow to it. I like it XX

[Tai Chi Italy]

Great metaphor for life this poem Anata, I see it has a lot of gods own nature in it too. Da Erb reminds us like Bob Marley, that we are free!lol I loved this. Smiling at you, TAi

[Thea M. Joy]

I thought this was pretty great! I can't say I directly relate, but I know plenty who can! LOL :)

[Silvia - Scribo, Ergo S..]

Highly enjoyable. Has a splendid rhythm and flow to it.