Redemption

 

Come forth out darkness

Rejoice in the light that brings

Sweet redemption falls

 

Reviews

[J. Alfred Potter]

Ahh... I just love haiku. This is yet another work of yours that actually speaks to me. I am actively seeking redemption. It does bring light that we should rejoice in, but how long should we rejoice before we begin to gloat? That is a question that I can never answer.

Very good job.

[Yira Simone]

This was...wow...just wow. Your take on the three words simply blew me away. I LOVED this. I loved the way you implied we must take respondsibility and not let greed over take us. Loved the wording and the message of this haiku. Great work!-Catrina