"A Monday Thought..."

"A Monday Thought..."

A Poem by Chris

 

"A Monday Thought..."

Sunrise and sunsets are times of wonder

and in-between the world breathes and beckons

...drawing us out of our selves and into life.

 

 

Chris

 

© 2012 Chris


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Between breathing in and breathing out, the poet wonders, caught in the perpetual dilemma about life..'the world breathes and beckons' is simply superb.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Chris

11 Years Ago

Welcome back John...
Nice. Me likey

Posted 11 Years Ago


Chris

11 Years Ago

your avatar needs a ghillie suit!
the in between time.....just slogging through cold and muddy water, hoping to find a few nuggets

Posted 11 Years Ago


Chris

11 Years Ago

I'm glad you paused because - you didn't have to. Thanks man.
Inhalation of new dawn
Exhales wonderment
Waiting to be fulfilled

xoxo

Posted 11 Years Ago


...times of wonder that are so many times slept through...then when found...wow!
the day in and day out beckoning pulls from isolation and negativity to life, as you say...the LIVING is the only way... enjoyment comes in the forgetting self and treasuring the wealth of others..

Posted 11 Years Ago


Chris... Out of all the words I have written, seen written or even read... This touches my heart's soul...

Posted 11 Years Ago


Chris

11 Years Ago

Arthur, if I may... thank you for listening.
...unless you work nights ;-)

I love your musings.

Posted 11 Years Ago


... yet most mornings I'd quite like to remain in that waking moment when I'm not quite human and hanging onto the edge of my dreams through the awful sound of the 'snooze' alarm lol.
Cool sentiments :)
I think I prefer sunset...

Posted 11 Years Ago


Chris

11 Years Ago

Hi Enid, glad you paused... nice seeing you.
Enid Blake

11 Years Ago

The pleasure is mine sir... :)
I feel somber reading this, as I believe was not your intent, just my mood at the moment. But yes sunrises and sunsets are always the times to ponder and for me I seem to be wide awake at this times, thinking always. It's the in-between that makes me somber, drawing us out of ourselves and into life.
I like this Monday thought, and perhaps I need to take the true feeling of free with me.

Posted 11 Years Ago


the 'we' and the Me...drawing Me out of the We..to be one with the We of the world...any way I say it it still wrings so true..but like pavlovs pooch ..I respond in kind to the sounds.

Posted 11 Years Ago



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Added on September 17, 2012
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