"Timeless..."

a Monday's Thought

"Timeless..."

Moments are so short

when its your eyes

that were full...

as the tomorrows ...ended.

Chris

Author's Note

feel free

Reviews

[Just Jayren]

It can be very difficult to truly send a message using so little words but I think praise is due here. the unique yet organic collection of words spring a 1000 questioned, none of which could never get a starit answer...

Good job!

[Corset]

Time flies by when you're looking into the eyes of love, you play it so beautifully here my friend

[Kelly Scheppers]

The brevity of this stole my heart...you reel me in, every time!

[Chris]

Awwwwwwwwwww... after finding yours I may have to dream a little.

[Kelly Scheppers]

...lol, why thank you!

[Dye]

I always enjoy pausing on your side. I really like seeing and reading your daily thoughts Chris. Moments really don't last that long.

[Chris]

I had just read one of yours - literally and was entering a comment when an ad took me off site and took away everything written. Sigh, hi Dye.

[Dye]

That's crazy-- well it's nice to know we were thinking of each other at the same time though. :)

[Robbie~xoxo~]

You always have a way of touching my heart... there are no words to convey the depth of this piece....

I know full well what time can do... it leaves a mark...
Beatifully penned, my dear friend. ~xoxo~:)

[Baby Ricochet]

Pretty cool bro......................

[Chris]

I need to revisit yours, haven't had my "fix"in a few days... thanx for the thoughts.

[Debbie_Philly]

Very beautiful Chris.... just beautiful.... you always say so much with just a few lines... lovely !!

[Chris]

Did the wedding work out? Good seeing you Deb.

[00000000000000000000000..]

This is deep Chris, Its like expressing a moment of beauty you wish not end. I think of a sunset or a moon rise as an example in my case with what you wrote . I liked it very much!

[Chris]

Watching life pass does that Jon... my coffee got cold...off to refill...

[0000000000000000000000000000]

Sure does!

It felt for me as a woman who looked at you, with beautiful eyes, as if was happening a true apocalypse, of true love, nuclear of love, and pure freedom, after.... ;) this made me stress free for the moment I'm in now. :) thanks sweet Chris!

- Elisa

[Hannah]

Once again your word choice amazes me- your talent is truly inspirational... Beautifully accurate poem Chris :)

[Chris]

Awwww... nice having you pause...