"Life - its just so unfair ~ "

The day after ---

A bit of examination followed by observation and introspection; ending in a historical retro-spect - 5-7-5-7-7 no less.  I must agree...

"Life - its just so unfair ~ "

A week of
nasally-stuffing sinus-seizing brazenly-c o l d,
umbrella-destruction-windy,
deeply-dark forebodingly winter-gray,
rain-swept-body-soaked
heart ground and ground
into the pavement,
days
- becomes
a s--l--o--w,
cinnamon-apple and hot-chocolate-scented-memoried,
sinfully toasty, beautifully resplendent
autumn-sun-drenched October
weekend saturday - afternoon...
where even the daymares have their own
comfy cosy to be cosily-comfy.

Now I understand
the ol' Dagwood comic strips -
all too well - uh huh...

Even genderless pillows
are Siren snuggle-bunnies.

Chris

Author's Note

The clock just struck 4PM - damn...

Reviews

[Kansas Aurora]

This one made me laugh! xD
You brought about time and the time of year changing, loosing light and time to get everything done, into a mirthful and almost comedic thread of thought. Not to forget about those damn sniffles that seem to always catch up to us in fall.

KA

[Kelz]

Negatives to positives are my favourite. Uplifting, great write x

[Muse]

When I stop and complain...I remind myself that it's better than the alternative. We must have the crappy days to appreciate the good ones I guess.

[Kat Collins]

You paint the most amazing pictures, my friend. Sounds like my weekend. Loved it.

[Joiedevivre]

i like the way this made me feel. Quite some alchemy!

[joshua deathdealer]

Ha ha who needs misery when you can have Dagwood and hot chocolate followed by snuggling with the body pillow. This is awesome and original work!! Love it.

[Christy Sargent]

I just pulled my sweater around me a little tighter and am thinking some nice hot Lemon Zinger. Maybe I'll make some pumpkin bread, too. Smells so good. Just like fall...just like your piece. Thank you.

[Judas Hammer]

Intense. I enjoyed this pen. Your work is always so fresh and original with an awesome view point

[Robbie~xoxo~]

You really know how to make an miserable week into something special. I love the optimistic flip from- "A week of nasally-stuffing sinus-seizing brazenly- c o l d"
to- "cinnamon-apple and hot-chocolate-scented- memoried, sinfully toasty beautifully resplendent" -- Splendid, indeed!

[Penlady]

Its all what we make of it, and you always make something good.