Everything is a Learning Curve

My first attempt at a Qautern. The title seems fitting :P

Everything is a learning curve:

Riding bikes without training wheels

Trying to keep balance and swerve!

Falling, the blood, the pain you feel,

 

Yet you get up and ride again.

Everything is a learning curve:

Failed love endeavours all in vain,

A test of one’s mettle and nerve.

 

Soon you will get what you deserve

But for now fight back stinging tears...

Everything is a learning curve:

Through hope and fear, with frowns and cheers.

 

Don’t be fearful and don’t regret,

Hindsight is the master to serve.

Do your best to never forget

Everything is a learning curve.

Author's Note

Thanks to MysticMirage for introducing me to this format.

The usual comments and suggestions are welcome :)

Reviews

[realmwriter]

Good flow, good imagery. Kind of my favorite form to write in. Guess I'm old school. I like this a lot. When we cease to learn, we cease to live.

[Coffee Vampier]

I always loved reading your poetry, I love a lot

[stars are far]

i liked this a lot ..
great piece :)

[Dennis White]

I like the form you have written this in and the progressive nature of each stanza. Very nicely done! Write on.

Dennis

[李[A]]

I'm unfamiliar with this type of poem structure, but nonetheless do find it quite intriguing. I really find all the innocence poems you write along with the growing up ones quite interesting because I can directly relate. The clause "Everything is a learning curve" is so prominent in the way the message is completely not surreptitious: allowing for the reader to fully feel the impact. Nonetheless, great job!

[Sleeping Maiden]

Nicely written! I like it! Very inspiring and encouraging. It flows beautifully. Great write!

[Emily Rae]

nice job with this, hard to believe it's your first

[BlackStar]

I like this because it's cool. The rhythm is quite upbeat and it flows pretty well. The rhyming scheme is well planned, and the poem is well penned. Brilliant! I'm sure I've learnt something from this poem...so thanks for sharing :)

[Lanke Doll]

I like this a lot. I've been going through a lot latly and this really actually helped me. Thank you.