TEDDY BEAR

TEDDY BEAR

A Poem by Angel Bird

 

 

 - Teddy bear, my sweet teddy bear

 

 - Every moment, good and bad you share

 

 - Dice however they fall, you care

 

 - Deities never replace you in any despair


 - Yes in my arms all my tears you bear

 

 

 

 - Born out of daddy's old flare

 

 - Every hole, mommy knows to repair

 

 - A constant smile on your face you wear

 

 - Reassuring you will always be there





(copyrighted material)

 

 

© 2015 Angel Bird


Author's Note

Angel Bird
Acrostic with monorhyme
Mixed forms

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Wonderful piece.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

There is a beautiful sense of peace that is found in your words... I can remember (believe it or not!) the days when a teddy bear could make me feel at ease and take away the stresses of the day. Love this!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

ah! this is so sweet and cute.

Posted 10 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Awe that is so sweet... but it has a deeper meaning to what the teddy bear represents, beyond just a stuffed companion... it reflects the warmth of love the child is surrounded by.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

My admiration for form, and also witty content.
Small correction, seventh line, It is spelled "repair"

Posted 10 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.


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