floating mirage

floating mirage

A Poem by Angel Bird
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of consciousness and 'reality'

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Elusive as the moon
 

 
On a hazy winter day
 

 
Is the inner dilemma
 
 
 
Of ethereal beliefs

 

 

 
To this shaken world
 

 

 

 

(copyrighted material)

© 2012 Angel Bird


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So true to tis shaken world. As my youth department teacher asks me what good has come from this year so far I truly can say anything. Two death in my family and one that actually made me cry. Even that friday my mother describe how that day was very similar to "The day after tomorrow" as how the world had earthquakes and tsunami like Japan in particular.As that day was an example of what you said. "To this shake world."

Posted 8 Years Ago


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This brings to mind a morning where the snow has fallen and the morning sun warms the air just enough to lift a layer of fog from the white surface, obscuring reality and giving us pause to take a look within our own inner voices before treading our across the surface that we may not now it's stability.

Fabulous ink Angel!
Aaron

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

So true to tis shaken world. As my youth department teacher asks me what good has come from this year so far I truly can say anything. Two death in my family and one that actually made me cry. Even that friday my mother describe how that day was very similar to "The day after tomorrow" as how the world had earthquakes and tsunami like Japan in particular.As that day was an example of what you said. "To this shake world."

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I can surly relate to this shaken worlds and the worst is yet to comesad but japan is in bad shape

Posted 8 Years Ago


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This is good. I like how you packed a lot of meaning into just a few lines, I like to do the same thing as well in some of my writing. The analogy:

"Elusive as the moon
On a hazy winter day"

was absolutely perfect. I loved it.

Posted 8 Years Ago


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This creates such a subtle ambience, first showing the world in an almost dream, then drifting into that world which is deeper.. more profound.. and the heart that embraces such ethereal beliefs... Beautifully done.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on January 28, 2011
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Tags: beliefs, moon, dilemma, winter, world, ethereal, elusive, shaken

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Angel Bird
Angel Bird

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