Trapped

Trapped

A Poem by Angel-fish
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The worst of times with a monster

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She's killed me on the inside
I can no longer be alone.
There is no place I can hide,
She has invaded my home.

Her stupid rules
Keep me bound...
She can be so cruel
I don't want to be found.

My mother is mean!
I feel like I'm stuck.
Trapped in a dream,
But I can't wake up!

She took away my will,
My freedom is breakin'..
My heart feels a chill
Since I was mistaken.

I thought she loved me,
But now I can see
She ignored my plea,
And I will never be free.

© 2013 Angel-fish


Author's Note

Angel-fish
please respect my privacy, don't copy-paste.

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This is so powerful, I really love it. The rhythm you use here makes the poem feel like it is rushing forward as I read it. I also laughed, because this reminds me of my poem "To My Dear Mother", so I can sympathize!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Angel-fish

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much, I am glad you found it to be a good read.
A heart breaking write but well written.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Angel-fish

10 Years Ago

Thank you, I'm happy you like my writing style.

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Added on November 7, 2013
Last Updated on November 8, 2013
Tags: monster, mother, bound, private, emotional, angry

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Future rescue swimmer. Not like other people, but still enchanting. more..

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