Just An Awful Girlfriend

Just An Awful Girlfriend

A Poem by Girl With A Pen



Please don't touch me
Don't hold my hand
If we are together 
Then act like a man

Please don't cling to me
I don't like to kiss
I don't want your texts
Telling me how much I'm missed

Keep your distance
Don't try to morph into my life
Please don't talk about the future
I wouldn't make a good wife

Go have fun with your friends
Just leave me alone
Leave me a message
I'll be glad if you don't come home

I don't want to meet your family
When I break up with you
They will just be more people
I'd have to hurt too

Please don't come by my house
I'll just see you around
No I don't want to go out
I like to stay home bound

Don't give me nicknames
Then I'll throw a fit
I am not your baby
I have a name so please use it!

I wanted to warn you before
But now that it's getting closer to the end
You're already starting to see
That I make an awful girlfriend

© 2014 Girl With A Pen


Author's Note

Girl With A Pen
I wrote this poem because I know I am not girlfriend material. I can't stand the thought of someone trying to morph themselves to me. I hate to be touched and I hate to be cling to. Guess I'm just better alone

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This is a very frank poem and to the point. Harsh but honest. Nicely constructed

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very well said better to be Honest then not
tell the truth and then them get hurt in the long run.


This had a nice flow to it thank you for sharing.


Blessings. kindred poet

Posted 9 Years Ago


Love the brutal honesty. Its good to be honest. even if the truth hurts. Well done! the flow and rythme is really amazing. 100/100

Posted 9 Years Ago


The *Girl With A Pen* is certainly not afraid of it. I enjoyed the honesty and self-awareness here. It is better that the narrator knows that she's happier alone; most don't and wonder why they have to keep scraping off old partners with their morning loofa. Well done.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Ahh that's great rhyming! I like the concept and honesty! Great job

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

great rhyming in this poem. Rhyming is not an easy feat! Also, I can relate to this too well. The idea that people can't understand why you chose not to be in a relationship. Excellent work. Keep writing!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

:). Brilliant. What a subject to choose and how beautiful are those words. I am impressed

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Girl With A Pen

9 Years Ago

Thank you. I am glad you liked it

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Added on July 15, 2014
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