Tell Me

If you love me
Then love me
Tell me if you don't want me

Don't just make me hang by a breaking string
Wondering if you're gonna save me,
If you're not

Tell me the truth
Tell me if you love me

Or if you hate me

I can take it,

I'm a big girl
I can handle the truth

But let me tell you
I love you
I really do

And I would save you
If you were hanging

Just by a breaking string

There,

I told you
Now you tell me

Reviews

[GamingGal]

Pros: I love this. I like the stanzas and your word choice and the story and everything! Especially the last stanza. I have a friend who is sort of going through this, and she needs to read this. We all need to learn to ask for answers like this poem does. Because we deserve them.

Cons: None.

Overall: I like this poem a lot.

[Andrew J. Green]

If the world lived be this poem, there would be no head games. Great words!

[Art]

nice poem...expressing love to another is so important within a lasting relationship...

nice...