Miles Away

I have someone dear to me that is in another country, i love him with all my heart.

Even though we're miles apart,
two is one, connected hearts,
Toghether forever, is what i want to be,
but the risk of asking, "Do you love me?"

Our heart is now one, i freely give,
Without you i do not think i can live,
We're miles apart, but connected as one,
Our love for each other can never be undone.

Reviews

[Rodrick Franklin McLare..]

Nice... check out mine, if you haven't already. I the love Angel motif and the pointed aspect of suffering. That comes from loving that, which you can not have. The ethereal touch of madness, it bring...

The sanctity of insanity.

Peering eternally, over the edge of a precipice. We are fascinated, with the falling into. With no control to stop, that desire. The inner torment
of the imaginary, and never recognizing. The depth of the deity, that you play with. Or contend, with the somethings willingly offered. And, have no idea. Of the outcomes, in that torture. As their wings spread, an laugh as you sigh and beat the sky. To make amends, dive. Into...

That precipice 'with arms wide open', so named. By deities duality... Sufferance.

know the song by : GooGoo Dolls, with arms wide open... perfect!

I sympathize, but not surprised. By: the Angels point of view. Spread your wings. 'Cry freedom' Brave Heart and head, for that ethereal promise... of tomorrow. To pray for you it last, this love you have.
It's telling. Ro.

[nora]

oh god, i love this! it reminds me of an ex-boyfriend because we lived miles and miles away from eachother, lol. the flow of this is great and i love the whole change in tone between the first four lines and the second four lines. the way you change from beig unsure about it to being really in love. its great :D

"We're miles apart, but connected as one,
Our love for each other can never be undone"

i love that part. its so pretty and sweet. the rhyming is great and the concept is beautiful :) good luck with the relationship :) great write, angelofsorrow!

[beefjerky]

love is a strong emotion, and a strong word... it's much stronger than hate... i like this poem and keep writing...