Yes, I want a Strawbery..

Yes, I want a Strawbery..

A Poem by Naomi Montana Walsh
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I love Strawberries..

"

 

I never say no to strawberries


Of course, I want a strawberry

I want many...I want red flesh and seeds

I want strawberries.


 

I have a affinity, to the strawberry

This is the fruit that
I would be

it grows close to grown a bit of shade and a bit of sun

a white blossom reminds me of innocence

Vines , between strawberry families


If I were a fruit, my seeds would be on the outside as well.

I would be shaped very much like a heart

and I would for the most part be sweet.


 

::;Inspired by FruitFlesh..

Thank you Kelli.. for making me aware of the book.


 

 

© 2009 Naomi Montana Walsh


Author's Note

Naomi Montana Walsh
Kelli..recommended Fruitflesh..which inspired this poem..

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YEaH!!!! I am sooo glad you are reading it!!!
isnt it amazing? every page is a succulent bite of sweet inspiration!!!
I myself dont know what piece of fruit i'd be, but this is an amazing write!....love the thought you put into it, and as you read the book...you will find other pieces of fruit you'd like to be as well....


p.s.
when you finish that book i have another i can recomend...
i still havent finished fruitflesh yet, but instead of reading straight through, i flip it open, read a bit....write then go on...lol!!!
awesome job sistah!!!

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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aw i love this piece, its so cute. the writing style in this alone reminds me of strawberries. I like how you describe human attributes by using a fruit as a metaphor. It's fun and original.

xxCat

Posted 14 Years Ago


Now I just have to make a strawberry and peach pie!

A fun piece much welcomed.

Jack

Posted 14 Years Ago


YEaH!!!! I am sooo glad you are reading it!!!
isnt it amazing? every page is a succulent bite of sweet inspiration!!!
I myself dont know what piece of fruit i'd be, but this is an amazing write!....love the thought you put into it, and as you read the book...you will find other pieces of fruit you'd like to be as well....


p.s.
when you finish that book i have another i can recomend...
i still havent finished fruitflesh yet, but instead of reading straight through, i flip it open, read a bit....write then go on...lol!!!
awesome job sistah!!!

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like this, This is so wonderful and cute.

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on October 21, 2009

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Naomi Montana Walsh
Naomi Montana Walsh

Los Angeles , CA



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I am a writer and Artist .. well actually those are the same thing to me..I like to tell stories with art and I like to make pictures with words ..I live a happy life now but have walked through the v.. more..

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