A Former friend.

A Former friend.

A Poem by Naomi Montana Walsh
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I was and still am a good friend of my childhoods friends .. but somehow as an adult I never connect and my adult friendships never last.. this is about one of those.

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I still think of her, that friend once removed...

and never as dear as those who held my hand as a child.

 

I still think of her, too old for patty cake,

but still jumping rope.

 

I still picture her , putting her damage on

eying me so suspiciously.

We should have had more in common,

being equals in age, but as a child I ran too fast and tired too early.

 

Still, by the time I met her, I was already too far ahead to catch up with,

or she was too far behind to care.

I still think of her , but never as dear as those who held my hand as a child.

She was right to eye me with suspicion. .

© 2010 Naomi Montana Walsh


Author's Note

Naomi Montana Walsh
not really much of a poem.. but heck..

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I have the same four best friends since elementary school but my adult ones seem to come and go so I know that feeling... I think this is a poem... it is bout emotions and free flowing... I like your straight forward approach.

Posted 14 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

this is a unique piece naomi.....thanks for the being different

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on March 21, 2010
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Naomi Montana Walsh
Naomi Montana Walsh

Los Angeles , CA



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I am a writer and Artist .. well actually those are the same thing to me..I like to tell stories with art and I like to make pictures with words ..I live a happy life now but have walked through the v.. more..

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