Nevermore...

I just rewrote this ..but it was first written years ago, I can not even recall for whom.

His eyes like the scorned raven on Poe's pallid bust of Pallas.

His lack love, lack devotion, heart, so full of holes that it can hardly contain true sentiment,

his ranting, senseless,obscure,abrasions, Scream at me , unwelcoming salutations, become the ammunition for my departure.




I am well done with his sarcastic devil's wit , chased to the cliff, of our brief

but tumultuous relationship, where I jump back into the sea of reality that scorns his kind and swim as fast as I can toward a setting sun .

              I can still hear his tortured cries of never more..

Author's Note

this is a rewrite ..I found a lot of my old poetry.. it needed work so I am still working though them with older more mature eyes>

Reviews

[NinjaPi]

amazing poetry. This is beautiful.

[Deaths Cold Kiss]

i love this

[deeps]

Thisis amazing write here so very emotional.
I like this. Splendid write.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

This is fantastic.. you done Poe proud with your intriguing references to him and work... certainly a very misunderstood man, but then again aren't all great artists.

[aaaa]

I loved it, very emotional. I like your writing style. I hope you remake more of the old poetry.

[bluessadmood]

oh dear ,i swear everything you write shines and cries..your words are so alive
i really wonder how you do it my friend..even though i think this needs more work on it
still i found it so amazing,it really touched me..every word,how you choose them..
his words cried high,meant nothing..still i did not know whether to follow or leave
i was done with his devilish wits,wanted to run from his dreams to sea of realty
realty that never liked his kind,still i could hear his cries..they would not stop
i was not sure of some words ,still i was immensely engaged with the words
lovely write..