A Cute Poem For a Cute Girl

This poem I have dedicated to my best friend. She is the one who motivated me to write.

You changed my world with a blink of an eye
That is something that I can not deny
You put my soul from worst to best
That is why I treasure you my dearest Marites

You just don't know what you have done for me
You even pushed me to the best that I can be
You really are an angel sent from above
To take care of me and shower with love

When I'm with you I will not cry even a single a tear
And your dearest friendship have chased away all of my fear
You have given me a life that I could live worthwhile
It is even better everytime you smile

It so magical those things you've made
To bring back my faith that almost fade
Now my life is a dream come true
It all began when I gifted a friend like  you

Now I have found what I am looking for
It's you and your presence in my life and nothing more
Co'z you have given me this feeling of contentment
In my life something I've never felt

I wish I could talk 'til the end of day
But now I'm running out of things to say
So I'll end by the line you already know
"I LOVE YOU" more than what I could show

Reviews

[Najam Us Saher]

This is amazing. What a wise choice of words and flow. I loved this. Well done.