Not real

actually, in the end, the words "The End" are supposed to rhyme with "Again"...if you didn't catch that. sorry it sucks, sorry for suckish title. thanks if you like it :)

In the dark, I hear a voice.

I look around, but have no choice.

I feel around, and find a door.

I can't stand the dark no more.

Through the door, I slow my pace.

Then i see your smiling face.

He comes close to give me a hug.

His arms are warm and oh, so snug.

He dissapears, and I hear his words.

The pain comes in like stabbing swords.

In the darkness once again,

 I hear his words.

"I Love You"....The End.

Reviews

[Jamie Taylor]

I Love This Poem. The Flow Is Really Good