All I ask of You

I will give you
the sun
the moon
the stars

I give you
my heart
my soul
the words of my art

There is little
I wouldn't give
I wouldn't do

But all I ask of you

Is to love someone else

So I could stop this mad chase for you

Reviews

[Perkele.7885]

Do you think that if I am with someone else that your affection will immediately abate! I sense the opposite before any abatement starts. Especially, if the attraction was strong initially.

[Anne Verona]

Well, that is indeed true. It wouldn't.

[Valerie]

Ahh this is so sad. We'll give the people we love everything and we won't ask anything in return. That's how much we love them. Beautifully written poem, Anne.

[Anne Verona]

Yes, we indeed will do. Thank you so much Valerie :)