Scorched and healed

As I walk down my narrow field of vision that I only feel gets narrower, I look up at the sound of gunshots ripping through the air and see him. Suddenly I collapse, nothing can help me now.

Author's Note

I hope you will review my story with sincerity, and I also hope you're able to say that you find my story interesting and you enjoy it.

Reviews

[Delmar Cooper]

I see the title. Did you forget to upload the story?