Silent Skies

Your Pages Still Remain Unwritten

As The Rain Continues To Fall

Silent Skies Speak Upon Your Pathway

They Will Lead Me To Where I Must Find You

The Chosen Moment, The Splitting Seconds

Hiding In The Distant Horizon, Beside The Ocean

Drowning In The Fire, Covered In The Ashes Forgotten

Your Hand Reaches The Air, Suffocating For Your Perfection

For Where Must I Wander...Only To Fall Where I Shall Be Lost

Revealing My Eyes, Only To Shut Them

As The Blood Runs Along With The Broken Tears

 

Reviews

[Anima Inspired]

I quite liked this piece... You have a great handle on the written word, in terms of making your writing "beautiful" to read. There are areas where you can tighten things up, perhaps create a little smoother flow, but all in all I think you do have a natural talent when it comes to expression... Good poetry is what comes from within the soul of the poet, and the nature of the beast, if you will, is that some people can relate to your words and others can't. Don't stop writing...you do have talent.