A Dream for Winter

Midnight stars cast their breath upon your face

As the moon makes the frosted waters dance

The winter does not your enchantment erase

Only reminds me of our sweetly given chance

 

You smile as my fingers trace your skin

As my heart can do nothing but begin

And as I breathe your breath inside of me

The path of Heaven is all I see

 

All I bare witness to

As I fall into you

 

And fear not the perils of the wild

Nor wicked fools that make us prey

None shall steal the joys of our child

For none shall withstand our fray

 

And while you dream away a sweet reverie

While I kiss your lips, awaiting infinity

 

You smile as my fingers trace your skin

As my heart can do nothing but begin

And as I breathe your breath inside of me

The path of Heaven is all I see

All I bare witness to

As I fall into you

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

for my best firend...and her future soulmate. :)

Reviews

[persianleopard]

I like. Must save to library. Great work. :)

[WiLL i e]

Very well structured, wonderful flow, everything one hopes love might be. Nice piece

[Seshat Nidaba]

I like your language, very ornamental.

[Star Cross]

This poem is absolutely lovely! It is sweet and touching, I love the repetition of your stanza and how in the end you added the powerful statement at the last stanza.

[Aria]

thank you!