anchorage

Set your target and get set go

standing on the point of anchorage of ocean

I've been looking for the ship 

I'm starving to go to that side of the sea

But I can swim all over the sea

Still I'm waiting, keeping the risk of drowning in mind

I'm hoping to achieve my concrete level

with the cravenly insight of mine

Nobody is there to stop me

I'm staring at the dark blue sky

having doubt of the weather in mind

I'm questioning myself

though I know the depth of my thirst

Still I'm waiting for the ship coming to its anchorage

Author's Note

correct me please

Reviews

[Prabha Salimath]

The poems unfolds many feeling of diabolic situation. Yes it is a that waiting looks fairer and safe decision, the world of that side of sea foster in you a feeling ' I can swim ' but conscious mind says no as it know the possible injuries you get. Life is exactly about that point, as I feel. I read many great personalities like Jackma, John Com, Amitabhji and many more no exception to that oddities. Oddity is something that makes heart brave, mind super active so we become a little doer than waiting. There may be many and many we get but we have to choose a path to stand firm otherwise Life sea will take us inside there where we lost forever.

[Prabha Salimath]

The poems unfolds many feeling of diabolic situation. Yes it is a that waiting looks fairer and safe decision, the world of that side of sea foster in you a feeling ' I can swim ' but conscious mind says no as it know the possible injuries you get. Life is exactly about that point, as I feel. I read many great personalities like Jackma, John Com, Amitabhji and many more no exception to that oddities. Oddity is something that makes heart brave, mind super active so we become a little doer than waiting. There may be many and many we get but we have to choose a path to stand firm otherwise Life sea will take us inside there where we lost forever.

[Happy hours]

Yes, You're absolutely right...Risk is always there in our mind...thank you for the valuable review... :)

[Deepika]

Positivity is the key! Though the person seems to be more in a dilemma to chose the means of travelling, he is steadfast bout his decision to take a step towards his destiny. well written!

[Happy hours]

thank you deepika for the valuable review :)

[Jen]

The lines tell the story of a man lost in an unknown island and waiting near the shore for the ship...this tells us the way life tells us how tough it can be and how desires have to wait...Your poem has got the guts to impress the reader with its seriousness and melancholia...
Good points man. keep it up!

[Happy hours]

right jahanvi...thanks a ton for the read and review... :)

[Jen]

You're most Welcome

[ayesha gupta]

i liked reading it. most of our problems we create ourselves by living in confusion ' can do or cannot'.
nicely penned.

[Happy hours]

yes you are right :) thanks for the valuable review :)

[Gurleen Saluja]

Well penned. Titled aptly anchorage. Thanks for sharing :)

[Happy hours]

thanx gurleen for your kind words

[Gurleen Saluja]

You are welcome :)