Today's Menu:

To start we have a small taste of FRUSTRATION on top of a carefully plated portion of STRESS. Followed by a serving of HEARTBREAK sprinkled with LIES. Next we'll have RESPONSIBILITIES accented with the PRESSURE overtop and a taste of DISRESPECT on the side. Finally, there'll be HOPE for dessert with a nice filling of IMPROVEMENT and LEADERSHIP topped off with FRIENDSHIP. Along with your life, we'll be serving a nice STRONG drink of HAPPINESS to make it BEARABLE.

Reviews

[thecoolone52]

well tell me what restraunt is serving this and i will surely be attending................. nice work

[Sapphire Balasquez]

aww, i like how it turned out. it was kinda sad at first like... ohh yeah, this is so true... and then it turned out okay. ^^ you might think about doing phrasing and stanzas, just so it can be read with the same kind of rhythm you intended, though the capitalization did work nicely and it's just a suggestion. I really like this piece, keep up the good work! ^^