A thought

Few lines from my book "Mourning Before Sunrise"

Deep inside my mind lies a thought,
some times i want it to come out,
but some times i keep it locked,
but it keeps peeping out through the window of my heart,
a thought resides somewhere in the silence of the sound,
in the mist of the emotions lies hidden some where in the mind, a thought

Author's Note

please free to criticize

Reviews

[Deepika]

Thoughts and emotions are related. Though we try to shut our minds from thinking useless stuff, it's difficult to hide them when they take the form of emotions, as they are felt by our heart and are impulsive.Lovely idea :)

[CA Anurag Sharma]

Bang on Deepika... the thoughts always tickle in our minds until we get them out... thanks a lot for your review :)

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It's interesting how our thoughts always find a way to peer through the walls we put around them. I love the line "but it keeps peering out through the window of my heart." We can hide our thoughts from others but not our hearts.

[CA Anurag Sharma]

Agree with you FT Ledrew... thanks for your kind words :)