Moonlight night... (part II)

Part II of this poem ........... now look what happened the next...

Moonlight night 

(part II)

She stand again and went for the place where the

EVIL No.2 (society)

was waiting for her...

Someone said her polluted ... someone claimed devoid of shame .

But what the l'll girl do ,

It's all devil's game.

The evil no. 2 rose to it's peak 

And ultimately the girl's soul died .

what was left now!! her body!! .which would soon lost it's existence any how..

Out of her frustration she gave up with her life

News, internet, social media, media channels

Almost across whole nation reflected this tragedy ,

Earlier no one but now everybody

Protest started ignition was done

But what was the benefit, the soul which when needed this

Was ignored when surrounded by evil devils

Weather cared it or not but surely ,

Would lit a candle and March the next day

.........................................

This is how the devils are encouraged for rising up to the heights

if it was to be stopped that day...... These evils would surely die a day.....

                                            -- Anushka joshi 

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Anushka...
I think there is a good idea in this piece, but it needs lots of editing to smooth out lines, spelling etc.
the clash of individual vs. society is good.
j.

[Anushka joshi]

Thank you so much sir fr your guidance