I do

Pov:- My diary

I hear those screeching thoughts
Colliding the walls of her brain,
Right when she opens my first page
I do.
I listen to how she starts mumbling
Between her cries and tries to weave her thoughts,
So they don't traumatize others,
I do.
Shivering strokes of her fingers
Resisting the urge to tear up my pages like her tearing ties
She asks me to be patient with her,
I do.
I remember the drops of memories
She poured on me
First fear second resentment third grief
fourth regret; yes
I do
I feel her need to pen everything down
As if it really clears her mind
I know it requires more than that but,
I do.

" Anushka Joshi

Reviews

[emmajoygreen]

A tragedy in the making, life altering focus as if melting to little or nothing. Your display of deterioration and frustration is shown via your understanding. Helped by diary and diaries, past photographs and events you could discuss, bring to life - were it possible. This is sadness near tearing its hair out but

[Anushka joshi]

It is always delightful reading your reviews. Thank you so much for taking your time and giving your precious feedbacks. I love it.
Aj

[Neville]

I sense much sadness and frustration here .. and can relate .. before iPhones I used to notice people everywhere carrying their little notebooks around with them, now tho' not so often .. but I still do .. All Good Things,

Neville

[Anushka joshi]

I am sorry you could relate to all this misery. And yes, one of my favorite collections is collecting diaries but not by their looks but by Memories. I have quite a few and each one has a different story. I think the satisfaction that pages give me, mobile phones can't. But thank you so much for your review
Aj

[Neville]

I agree, you can't beat paper .. or in my case, parchment :)

[Chris Shaw]

Beautifully creative Anushka. You bring your diary to life and give it a human voice and feelings. Lovely poetry.

Chris

[Anushka joshi]

Thank you ma'am:)

[Chris Shaw]

You are most welcome:)

[msharma]

Wow!!What a picture painted dear. very well drafted.

[Anushka joshi]

Thank you so much ma'am. Hope you are doing well 🙂

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Like her tearing ties...nice line.
Anushka, this is a creative point of view.
by weird coincidence, I just wrote a poem that is from the poem's point of view.
She doesn't know whether to write in the diary or tear it up...she is not sure which would help ease her emotions the most.
j.

[Anushka joshi]

Wow!!
Maybe our thoughts met each other while making their way to our hearts.
I am glad you loved it.
Have you posted that poem yet, I wanna read it so bad
Aj