Destiny

Destiny, Ah that mystery,
Which will unfurl at some point of life,
It determines whether,
We'll be happy or in strife.

Whether it will be warm days,
Like spring with flowers,
Or, dreadful storms,
Cloubbursts, heavy showers.

I know nothing lasts for ever,
Except changes,
And memories,
Whicb carry through our ages.

It's hope which makes us see tomorrow,
It's hope which tells us all will be nice,
Its belief that God is there to protect us,
It's belief that makes the sun rise.

No whirlwind ever lasts forever,
No rainbow will be above us always,
Destiny is something which you,
Just have to face.

Destiny is a mystery,
With shocks and surprises,
To embrace it just remember,
The sun always rises!

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[magenta24uk]

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Huh...destiny...a word if I start writing may goes infinity....so I skip thinking bout this mystry..but here I loved the way you started and ended up with an excellent stanza that at least gives the satisfaction to the readers for reading this!!
A great read here😊

[Anvaya]

Thanks a lot for your feedback.

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You're heartedly welcome!

[benedict]

I love the repetition of words in line. It adds flavor

[Anvaya]

Thanks. This one went viral in my school.

[benedict]

One of your poems went viral? That is Awesome!!