Perfection

Such A Glorious Illusion!

Perfection is much like a rainbow, 

They are both unreachable destinations, 

Yet as unreal as they may be,

We are naturally drawn to their mystical powers and beauty,

 Never be afraid to chase either,

 They appear more magical and become clearer the closer you get to them.

Reviews

[MOON]

Beautiful write , thanks for stopping by to read Dad.

[Satan]

Thankyou so very much :)

[Firebird]

I really like that. Beautiful. Thanks. Not what i was expecting from your name.

[Satan]

Satan never had a chance to have his say until now. Thanks fellow Phoenix, glad you liked it :)

[Amelia May]

Indeed this piece is a remarkable one. I feel it is much different than the previous writing of yours that I have reviewed. By far one of my favorites. Well done.

[Satan]

It is a bit of a stand alone for sure. I love it too, it inspires me. As do your kind reviews :)

[emmajoy]

Tis the colour of space, this poem. Well considered, concisely 'said, more than smoothly delivered- and yes, has its own touch of magic.

[Satan]

thanks for dropping in em, i appreciate the kind words. :)

[emmajoy]

I can be kind!

[Jonny The Savage]

Well put, fair beast. Well put.

[Satan]

Thank you kind sir. I'm going to delve into your writing further very soon so you better offer me some sweet sweet inspiration :)

[Jonny The Savage]

haha I've added a bit to Knowsticism, but it's not finished yet. Not sure if what I've added really helps much or is better fit for another piece entirely.

[Satan]

It must be important information though. You were compelled to write it down and share it afterall :)

[Fatema]

well done another very good writer,(everyone is)
Satan this is very incredible masterpiece

[Satan]

Thank you very much Fatema. I somewhat agree with you. I think everyone has the potential to be a very good writer. If we focus we can all share many meaningful messages through our words. Take care :)

[Fatema]

you too Satan

[Beefmoopie]

Well said! I've subscribed, can't wait for more!

[Satan]

Thank you very much beefy, it means so much to me :)

[Beefmoopie]

You're welcome! :D Hail Satan!

[Dak]

love the comparison! great poem

[Satan]

thanks dak :). that thought had floated in my head for so many years, it was relieving to finally get it on paper.

[FaeryQueen]

i love this poem! goooooooooooooooaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaals!

[Satan]

haha you're welcome :)

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

I liked this piece well thought out, very cleaver, is true and makes sence.
No thing, nor person could ever be perfect, but if u look beneath the survice some can come pretty close.
Short but a well thought out and well written piece, that made so much sence, and was an enjoyable read :)
keep writing :)

[Satan]

Thank you so very much cimmy. Some may go as far to say that it makes perfect sense... :p hehe. I'll keep writing, that's a certainty and I hope you don't stop anytime soon either.

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

I have stopped atm. I miss writing though. I just have run out of ideas at the moment lol. Your most welcome :)

[Satan]

Just write a poem about how you're going to write heaps of epic poems in the near future. .. If you believe in it enough I'm sure it will happen haha :p

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Haha i was thinking last night. Maybe one about gay rights or somthing... maybe haha. Thanks :)

[Satan]

Much respect to that, go nuts. Remember humans as a whole could do with a lot more rights, not only our gay brothers and sisters ;)

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Very true :)