ying yang

Yeah. Pretty pointless. Playing with opposites

my light is your darkness.
i breathe in your white,
and i exhale black,
i sigh crimson,
and cry yellow.

you breathe in my black,
and exhale your pure shimmery silver.
you sigh purple,
and cry green.

we're perfect opposites,
ying, yang.
you light me up.

Author's Note

I know that this is pointless, but did I do a good job capitalizing the opposition?

Reviews

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

Very good job. I like your use of colors.
Also the opposites and i find the poem romantic ..

Chloe

[Ethan Paz]

Good contrast. No special lesson to learn but you showed imagery quite well. Good job.