ying yang

ying yang

A Poem by Christine
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Yeah. Pretty pointless. Playing with opposites

"
my light is your darkness.
i breathe in your white,
and i exhale black,
i sigh crimson,
and cry yellow.

you breathe in my black,
and exhale your pure shimmery silver.
you sigh purple,
and cry green.

we're perfect opposites,
ying, yang.
you light me up.

© 2010 Christine


Author's Note

Christine
I know that this is pointless, but did I do a good job capitalizing the opposition?

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Very good job. I like your use of colors.
Also the opposites and i find the poem romantic ..

Chloe

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Good contrast. No special lesson to learn but you showed imagery quite well. Good job.

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on April 26, 2010
Last Updated on April 26, 2010
Tags: Literature, Poetry, Opposites, Light, Dark

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Christine
Christine

Seattle, WA



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