Revelation

I give much more than I take

I do not favor being awake, 

That taunting state of surreal slumber

The real moments reside within my dreams

I've found comfort in the illusionary

I tend to divert from mainstreams

And solacing artificial concepts

The proof's in the eating;

Why does it hurt when I breathe,

I only pray when in need,

Why I scar whilst I heal,

I can only write when I feel.

I wish to turn myself inside out.

And allow you to behold personified sensation,

As I am mute. 

With my obligation being assertion,

I customize my skin in resort,

In the favor of sentimental expressionism 

Reviews

[Rama]

Aphitenza,
Once it is revelation then you are already out of the dreams!! Come out of it and face the world and you will get more revelation even while you are not dreaming!!
Rama

[Aphitenza]

I agree ! However my revelation lies within the fact that the state of dreaming is what I have chosen to be true reality and not this confusing and cold reality we live in. In other words, I am trying to communicate that I choose this different reality for myself as it is much more comforting !