do you know this girl?

something that just came about out of sheer boredom.

goofy as the youngest child,
charismatic in doing so;
charming,
intelligent,
kind,
dynamic,
loving,
honest,
breathtaking,
sore eyes yearning for more than a sight;
hair as black as ravens swarming the night,
yet so soft and ever so beautiful
eyes of infinite luminous sparkle
(i can never turn them down)
staring lovingly into the portal which
brings her to across this plane to me;
small in stature, with a larger voice to be
Five more years to lifelong bonds unbroken
Four dirty little faces staring at me in my dreams
Three months left to the very last day alone
Two years in suspended waiting, suffering for
One girl, the only girl for me
do you know this girl i seek?
i'm desperately trying to find her.
if you can help me, please, speak.

Reviews

[Star-Runner]

This is really wonderful, and beautiful.

[OilsandSyntax]

what a romantic checklist of sorts...I wish you the best of luck in finding your gal. Nicely done peice.

[Gravedigger]

Risa sent me a request to read this, and I am glad I did. Once again you have demonstrated your abilities quite well, and I remain impressed by your creativity and vocabulary. The only suggestion I have that would really make it stronger is if it flowed more. It comes across as a tad random...If you could try to link everything a tad more, it would be incomperable.

I salute you

[Kimmee Jean]

i love you

[Kimmee Jean]

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww! brought tears to my eyes