Changes Part Two (November)

The sequel of "Changes" written in January 2011. Part One is available here:

I'm looking around - a year has passed,

The moment I seized is forever to last,

The secrets of cherished November

Still live in the imprints of soft fingertips

You left on my key, in your eyes that eclipse

The various colors of amber.

The waters of changes surround my shore,

The eyes of the suburbs see right to the core,

Respond to my heart's aspiration.

Eternity lingers in love's every breath,

And it is my place from November till death,

My shelter, my sweet isolation.

It's plain and it's simple - I have understood

That I will keep writing this story for good

And send you mysterious letters.

Discover the worlds that my verses create

For you to unravel and investigate,

Just keep them, and nothing else matters.

Reviews

[Seshat Nidaba]

This was really tender and sweet. I was surprised that you have romantisized November, it's like perhaps the most emotionally dramatic month for me, yearly!

Your verse reminded me of the voice of Heather Nova.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=m-IPiKXioFE&feature=related