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Free Fall

Free Fall

A Poem by Draven


It's a strange thing,
the paths that we've taken.
Like best friends
that parted separate ways.
Is it childish,
the way I feel for you?
Is it childish
to think of you each day?

It's a long night
lying in the shadows.
The memories bring
tears to my eyes.
It's kinda funny
the way things have happened.
What a small chance
I'd meet you at all.

I'm free. I'm free falling.
I'm free, free falling.

Thinking back to
the late nights spent talking,
telling secrets
with a trust not many have.
All the laughter,
the games and the stories -
they're pictures
locked in our hearts.

I'm free. I'm free falling.
I'm free, free falling.

There's a rainbow
out on the front lawn,
like your smile,
a line that changes all.
If we'd never met
I would still miss you.
If I lost you
I'd never sleep again.

I'm free. I'm free falling.
I'm free, free falling.

I want to run a
thousand miles for you.
I want to catch you
the brightest star in the sky.
I want to take you
under the ocean.
I want to scream your
name to the world.

I'm free. I'm free falling.
I'm free, free falling.

 

© 2012 Draven


Author's Note

Draven
For alyssa

This song is a remix. The chorus is not mine.

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The song heard fluid and could really enhance our heart vocally.The free falling seems endless.It somewhere ends in lost world unexpected.May we could tie our parachutes, but unfortunately we do'nt can.KEEP WRITING

Posted 11 Years Ago


Amazing
I like how you twisted the song to make it fit you and what you had in store for it :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


I thought it sounded familiar. Still, wonderful job. I'm sure this Alyssa, would be very pleased if she heard it.

Posted 11 Years Ago


This is amazing! I like how you used a song you already knew and added on your twist!

Posted 11 Years Ago


I think you should show her, I think she would really like it....(:

Posted 11 Years Ago


Angela ☄️

11 Years Ago

Ehhhh, I wish God would decide already. v.v But, I wish you the best...
Draven

11 Years Ago

My Father has plans for the both of us right now, and they are not to bring us together yet. But he .. read more
Angela ☄️

11 Years Ago

I hope you figure out soon, and I hope whatever he shows you is for the best. :)

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Draven
Draven

Mount Sterling, KY



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Hi, I'm Draven. I'm a father, philosopher, artist, writer, poet, and musician. I have a passion for the world and a deep love of all people in it. These are pieces of poetry or bits of writing t.. more..

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