Brother

Brother

A Poem by Draven

Brother,dear brother, Im sorry...

I know I havent been the best to you,

I made you the sacrifice for my life's pain.

I never thought about the concequences to my actions...

 

You have been there for me through it all,

but have I ever been there for you in return?

I guess sometimes we get caught up in ourselves

and we forget the people around us.

 

So many memories held between us, good and bad.

There are the times that you held me up,

and mostly the times in which I tore you down.

Will I ever be forgiven?

 

Brother, I apologize for the things that I have done,

the things Ive said, they were never true;

hollow words flowing from an empty shell.

Mabey one day you will come to grant me forgivness...

Mabey one day we can be one.......

© 2012 Draven


Author's Note

Draven
Im so sorry Asheton.

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This brought tears to my eyes. I have three younger sisters and seem like life and hurt have keep us apart more than we ever should have allowed. This is beautiful and defiantly heartfelt. Thank you for sharing this personal piece.

Posted 12 Years Ago


a beautiful poetic apology....love this

Posted 12 Years Ago


very nice, lovely appologize to your brother...It`s gentle and full of regret, I hope he forgive you! :)

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Draven
Draven

Mount Sterling, KY



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Hi, I'm Draven. I'm a father, philosopher, artist, writer, poet, and musician. I have a passion for the world and a deep love of all people in it. These are pieces of poetry or bits of writing t.. more..

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