Broken Glass (18)

Broken Glass (18)

A Poem by Tsukin Archangel
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Lol uhmmmmmm you're all probably going to think I'm like insane, or an axe murderer, i am neither but i do hope ur a disturbed by this

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Broken Glass
It lay at my feet
It was my knife
The tool to slay the living
And the welcome basket of the dead

The blood of the lifeless in pools
The smell of rot all around
Sickly
Rancid
But strangely Beautiful

I look at my hands
I need to know what happens next
The blood drips like rain all over
Blocking them
Leaving only red
Devouring what was me
Leaving only sadness and despair

I hear the whispers
I could have sworn they left
They told me they would
But they remained
The urging voices to kill
The ones that told me to pick up the glass
To strike those who I despised

They had lied to me
I was angry 
Nothing had changed 
Only now I was in deeper than before
I belonged to the voices now
I was their puppet
And there was only one thing left to do
And that was

To Kill

I picked up the broken glass
My reflection within but without
I moved through the doors that belonged to the slain
And waited for my next victim
The voices said they were sorry
They promised next time they would leave
So I let them lead me
Down the dark tunnel
A twisted hope in my heart
And a piece of Glass in my hand

© 2013 Tsukin Archangel


Author's Note

Tsukin Archangel
uhhhhm IM NOT PSYCHO!

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I really liked this! This was done very well to capture the thoughts of someone who comes off as insane, especially when the writer claims not to be psycho herself, lol. :P I loved the imagery and flow, wonderful poem! :)

Posted 5 Years Ago


Katherine S.

5 Years Ago

Sounds good to me. :P
Tsukin Archangel

5 Years Ago

lol, might as well if it's unavoidable right? lol
Katherine S.

5 Years Ago

Haha, yep!
Another fantastic write for the gothic contest from a very good poet. This was dark and full of unforgettable imagery of a subject that I suspect would be spot on. Well done again!

Helena

Posted 6 Years Ago


Tsukin Archangel

6 Years Ago

Thanks! Glad you thought so!! I honestly have like no idea what prompted this poem lol... but yeah.... read more
nice gothic!

Posted 6 Years Ago


Tsukin Archangel

6 Years Ago

THANKS!!! Glad you liked it :3
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"I picked up the broken glass / My reflection within but without" This is my favorite part, it's so deep. Wonderful job. It takes a curious mind and a wide imagination to put something like this together, and so well, at that.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Tsukin Archangel

7 Years Ago

I'm glad u enjoyed it :3 Yes me and my......unique way of looking at things...i blame anime for my u.. read more
DARK and SCARY for this one! 100/100 I love your poems!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Tsukin Archangel

7 Years Ago

you should check out my book dare if u havent :o u might like it
Katerina

7 Years Ago

OK! I will! :)
Tsukin Archangel

7 Years Ago

sweet~ :3 i look forward to ur critique :3
It does indeed pack a ominous punch, but that's the sign of a good writer, when you can step outside yourself and go against the grain of your own sentiments and tendencies...I'd say you've pulled that off more than sufficiently here lol :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


kublakhan27

7 Years Ago

Haha don' worry, you're safe...it's the people I went to school with that should worry the most...I .. read more
Tsukin Archangel

7 Years Ago

LOL high five to that
kublakhan27

7 Years Ago

lol *high-five*
Lol. I like it. The urges, the voices, and no matter how much you want them to go away, you almost always end up succumbing to them.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dark and Disturbing and I'm thinking Mind of a Psychopath. Not sure how you tapped that, but well done (I think).

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like the calmness in this story. The story is dark. But I like the flow of thoughts and the holding of glass in her hand. A entertaining poem. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Tsukin Archangel
Tsukin Archangel

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