Consumed

A very dirastic poem from my usual things~ Hope u like it

I whisper your name in fear of being heard

For even thinking it is a sin

How is it one can be so intoxicated

Yet have no outlet to free themselves?

It is a sad and dark fate

One that rips at the soul and clutches to those things living

It is like a virus

Contagious

And all consuming

But it is also what keeps me going

For it is none other than that bright glimmer of hope

That wondrous light at the end of the tunnel

It is none other than Love.

Reviews

[Summer D.]

What a darker perspective of love.
It was a wind up for a rather satisfying release.

"It is none other than Love."

Decent.
Though it was a good write.

I wouldn't say it was a totally drastic change from what you usually show me.
Your writing is dark in nature but sometimes you splatter dark all over the canvas and touch it up with dots of white.

It's a nice style.
It balances.

*85*

YT,

Summer

[SmileBig :)]

I really like this! Nicely written. Good job :)

[Tsukin Archangel]

thanks ;3 I try...havent really been in the poem mood lately lol, nothing to be poetic about atm~

[Brittany]

Oooo. Great description. Bain and bliss. Very good job of contrast.

[Lydia]

I like this! A very interesting way to describe love!