O my sweety!

This is a poem for kidz like me!

O my sweety !
Cute and cuddly!
Remember these
even when you are in the heaven!

I played with you,
I ate you,
I bathed with you,
I studied with you,
I went to school with you,
I watched television with you,
I slept with you!

You are my sweety ,
I did everything with you,
Not only me,all the girls of my age!

I realized the truth,
Only when I was ten!
That you are my toy,
That you are my doll!

O my sweety !
Cute and Cuddly,
Still I love you!

Reviews

[Einstein Noodle]

the twist from real to the imaginary caught me by surprise ..nice job young lady! and the expectations of fun with friends, joy with companionship becomes such a sad and lonely room .. i think you have a fine gift for expression ..keep writing for sure ... and tho your heritage is another culture ..pay attention to editing (we can never overdo it) ... for example "I ate you" pretty sure you mean "..ate with you " :) love and peace!
E.

[Ardra Nair]

thank u E.... and thanks 4 correcting my mistake! i accidentally wrote like that....

[mou]

Soooo Sweet Ardra!
Yes this age is the golden time for all of us .And you will realize it at later stage of your life.
A sweet tribute to all kids!
Keep up writing :)

[Ardra Nair]

Thank you so much, didi. You are missing your childhood? Nostalgic!

[mou]

You are most welcome ,dear :)

[Ardra Nair]

:) :) :) :)