Death again

I just feel like there's so much more to death .

Its death again 

back to torture you 

back to pick at your wounds 

that'll never heal 

back to prove it to you 

Once more 

Smiling at us 

I come for your loved ones 

seek for you

You can't cheat me 

there's no where you can hide 

no where you can flee

Author's Note

Tell me if i made some mistakes..

Reviews

[Ricky Campbell]

I feel when death is talking in the second half of this, it should be in quotations. Also, I feel it ends too abruptly, there is so much more you can go on about! So much potential! But I love it keep up the great work!