Severed

Severed

A Poem by Quill
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away with them

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It seems prime to let off some load

For in walks of life we acquire certain burdens

Some of which are quite useful as they come with rewards

Others are more detrimental than meaningful 

No one is meant to live without carrying responsibilities 

Therefore discerning becomes a key ability

For life itself demands such competence 

This potency is acquired through truthful living

Thus with a consideration of factual existence

I have found it necessary to offload certain things

Close evaluation of entities brings about this conclusion

There are no more thoughts needed on the matter

The burdens are weighing me down

Hence I part with these inconsistencies 

Their existence are needless to me

That is my resolve, my decision has been made

© 2022 Quill


Author's Note

Quill
Not everything is to be a part of our existence

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This was really a fantastic write. It's logical and philosophical bringing the best of both to the table. It reasons its way through the writing with precision and directs the reader along the path worn down by the author. And I must say that I heartily agree with the conclusions proffered. Well done! I enjoyed. F.

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Quill

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Glad you liked it Franklin, it was basically a personal experience transformed to words, thanks for .. read more



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This was really a fantastic write. It's logical and philosophical bringing the best of both to the table. It reasons its way through the writing with precision and directs the reader along the path worn down by the author. And I must say that I heartily agree with the conclusions proffered. Well done! I enjoyed. F.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Quill

2 Years Ago

Glad you liked it Franklin, it was basically a personal experience transformed to words, thanks for .. read more

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Added on March 8, 2022
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Tags: remove, rage, turn, new, psyche, philosophy

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Quill
Quill

Abuja, Christian, Nigeria



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