The Fate of Greed

A tale from the Heroine of 'To End the Crusade' 's past.

Everything she saw,

She claimed as hers.

The men, the women,

And even their powers.

 

The world was to be hers,

So she thought.

Every single thing,

Person, or thought.

 

Flirted with the medic's husband,

Ignored the Shade.

The one she wanted most,

Treated her like a plaything.

 

He threw her a bone,

But never gave more.

She noticed then,

Who he looked for.

 

The blasted medic,

Everyone always followed.

Their unnamed leader,

Their group's heart and soul.

 

Created a trap, she did,

The medic realized it at once.

Yet still, she went willingly,

To be sent to her own personal hell.

 

She was surprized then,

Her reward for handing the medic over.

Was to see the medic's sad smile,

As they stabbed the greedy child.

Author's Note

Please read and review! Thank you!

Reviews

[Briana O'Connor]

Wow. what a thrilling tale. It sends shivers up my spine. I could see the scene play out before me with you vivid description. Thank you for sharing.

[Arrinae]

I'm glad you liked it. I'm still trying to figure out how I want to do Gluttony to complete the set.

[Briana O'Connor]

Ya the first 6 are pretty easy to find a structure to. I've never been able to write much about gluttony either.

[Ashira Macy]

Is this one about the the brother's wife? It is sad that she was set aside by the one she wanted most. She seems envious to me, wanting the medic to suffer for things that she could not control. It is unfortunate how tragic all of these characters are.

[Arrinae]

Life is akways tragic in one way or another. And no, its about a child who was a dear friend of his ward. The brother being the heroine's husband. Sorry if it seems confusing. To help explain a bit ice has the power to heal, even better than water, at least in my eyes

[Ashira Macy]

It is all good. It may help to name them to distinguish the characters a bit more, though it might be that you don't want them named.

[Arrinae]

Not yet, I want to save giving out the main group of characters's names until I turn it into a book. Its why even the heroine's name is unknown.

[Ashira Macy]

That makes sense.