Diminuendo

Louder screaming!

Fighting for your life

the heart so scheming

begging hopeless for a knife.

Crashing, banging, torture!

Defenseless and sad

yet feeling great rapture,

the best you ever had!

I caress your skin softly now

so beautiful, so much damn beauty!

You're like the goddess to whom I vow

who cleanses my heart so sooty.

Author's Note

Please ignore bad grammar, if any.

Reviews

[Revolutionary]

quite the brutal love poem.I am not sure if we are talking S&M or make up sex,I pictured it both ways.this poem is about sex right

I like the poem , however , personally , I would have edited the last paragraph to something like :

"
Now , your soft skin I caress ,
so beautiful , a work of art .
You are like my goddess
who cleans the darkness in my heart.
"
That is just my perception though . Overall a nice poem .