The First Rain

It's first experience

The first touch of rain
Excitement inside the soul
Releasing phermones
Touching the heart's of life.

Rejoice and happiness
Tears came out of soul
The seeds breaks open
To see the cool water world.

Leafs are more greenish
Shiny and beautiful
Calling colorful butterflies
to take rest for sometime.

Sun is shy, behind the clouds
Such is the beauty of flowers
Carpeting the earth
Making earth a heaven of colors.

Each snd every life
Celebrates dancing and singing
The music of wilderness
Filled the air with melodious touch.

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Reviews

[Fabian G. Franklin]

I truly enjoyed this. The life-giving water is all around. We are born of blood and water and without water we die. It makes complete and perfect sense that without the blood we die as well. I believe everything physical is a mere representation of a greater spiritual truth, including our existence. Life is a classroom. Some students study hard while others fail but we all have things to learn.

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[jacob erin-cilberto]

I really like "the cool water world"---nice phrasing there.

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[Betty Hermelee]

We all wait for the first rain of spring; we anxiously await the first bud, thereafter many buds which create blossoms of every color, every size, every leaf....rain give its nourishment to these wonders of nature to grow, to breathe ....and then the cycle begins all over again...we are patient, we wait....
Warmly, B

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[Betty Hermelee]

You’re very welcome!
Warmly, B

[Thomas W Case]

Tremendous imagery. You take the reader into the scene.

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[Sunflower/Sara Kendrick]

Emotive and expressive work. Good ending. Sara K

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[mou]

Rain is the best cleanser on earth. Every beat of this poem is well felt as the 'First Rain' is long-awaited at my place.
- mou

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend

[Poetic Beauty]

This reminds me of somewhere in the world that has a dry season and now it is the rainy one that rejuvenate the earth with its droplets of water giving life to plant and animals alike.

I love the description of the spring like weather and the renewal of plants.

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend. I experienced first rain a day back after scrotching summer.

[Poetic Beauty]

Rain is extremely soothing especially when it has been scorching for a long period of time or even if it’s only been a week. Enjoy the rains!!